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June 16, 2016
Nexus, Haiku Version by TheMaidenInBlack touches on a beautiful romance, with a sprinkle of whimsy and an abundance of charm.
Literature Text
Your chest's tide pulls me, a
gravity spell that whispers
of stars, and moonlit secrets.
gravity spell that whispers
of stars, and moonlit secrets.
Literature
Consciousness
The surface appears calm and content
Within is a swirl of conflicting energetic emotions
Images and thoughts stream as rapid film on an old screen
Deep breaths in and soft heavy sighs
Wandering eyes kept alert to the skies
Whispering wind stirs the adrenaline
A quickened pace and steady pulse
Beneath heavy lids is vibrant colors
There is something communicating in silence
Loss of form, a sense of lightness
Into the veil where gravity changes
Surroundings are bright and energy is pulsating
You are home
Literature
addicted
my words struggle to reach you
I feel them claw the air
desperate for breakthrough
as if still you're there
rendezvous prescription
waiting for refill
adrenaline affliction
addicted to the thrill
Literature
Romance : An Abridged Version
She will drop another tincture in her tea
And say that it's for me.
But I know without asking
Where this conversation is going.
The hand holding is over.
Another summer in the books.
I've been reading noir all year -
Suspicious of everything.
What clued me was her breathing
Lesson learned.
Once more an abridged version
Of something like romance passes.
She will drop another tincture in her tea
And say that it's for me.
While I've known without asking
Why it wouldn't have lasted
Long enough for anything
But this -
An abrupt
Ending.
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This is submitted to Multhaiku's Recycled Haiku Contest , the original version of which is
It's pretty much a condensed version of its original, like the contest guidelines ask.
NexusYour chest dances a soft tide,.
entwined to gravity's lullaby
its caresses rocking your breathing
in waves of nocturne beauty.
I gaze from atop the Moon, a solitaire
our nexus pinned on universe's mantle
which draws my orbit in silent descent
and lays me down in your cupped hands' warmth.
Night's whisper is a sandfall that echoes,
rippling silence's surface
until it comes to be but fading mist
slowly condensing on your sleeping figure
and a useless dawn surrenders
bowing to the spell of moonlit secrets.
It's pretty much a condensed version of its original, like the contest guidelines ask.
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